Alright so first of all definitely sounds super dated

The hook sounds like something that would have came out a long time ago too

You know it sounded like it was going for a Bay Area sounding type of record

But it just sounded super dated

And you know I could I can hear the attempt for a certain sound

But it just wasn't hitting it

I would say collab with someone who can write hooks

I mean it's one thing to write a verse

And it's another thing to write a hook

Not everyone can write hooks

I would just suggest get better production better engineering and someone to write the hook

You know you can't do everything on your own

But yeah like I said production engineering

And just man like how dated the hook sound

It was just bad man